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		<title>Why does it take so long to write?</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 19 Apr 2007 14:23:00 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Tom McKay</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[&#8220;The best writing is rewriting.&#8221; (E. B. White)]]></description>
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		<title>Writing secret</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 08 Apr 2007 12:19:00 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Tom McKay</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[&#8220;Where do the words come from? The same mysterious place, I suspect, where notes of music go. They precede ideas, and are inseparable from them. For myself, I bow my head, touch wood, and utter a small prayer that the flow of them never cease.&#8221; (Joseph Epstein)]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8220;Where do the words come from? The same mysterious place, I suspect, where notes of music go. They precede ideas, and are inseparable from them. For myself, I bow my head, touch wood, and utter a small prayer that the flow of them never cease.&#8221; (Joseph Epstein)</p>
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		<title>How long should your copy be?</title>
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		<pubDate>Sat, 17 Mar 2007 19:20:00 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Tom McKay</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Just long enough to say what you need to say. &#8220;Omit needless words. Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts.&#8221; &#8212; The Elements of Style, William Strunk Jr., ...]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Just long enough to say what you need to say.<br />
<blockquote>&#8220;Omit needless words. Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts.&#8221;</p></blockquote>
<p> &#8212; <span style="font-style: italic;">The Elements of Style</span>, William Strunk Jr., E.B. White</p>
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		<title>Do your customers wonder about you?</title>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 08 Mar 2007 12:18:00 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Tom McKay</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[&#8220;The public should always be wondering how it is possible to give so much for the money.&#8221;(Henry Ford)]]></description>
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		<title>Business jargon baffles and alienates</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 06 Nov 2006 15:00:00 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Tom McKay</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Needless jargon in the workplace baffles and alienates your employees, according to a new study. It even makes some employees think you&#8217;re trying to hide something. A survey of Scottish workers found that more than half were fed up with bosses using management jargon. Two-thirds preferred no jargon at all. Link. I often rant about ...]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Needless jargon in the workplace baffles and alienates your employees, according to a new study. It even makes some employees think you&#8217;re trying to hide something. A survey of Scottish workers found that more than half were fed up with bosses using management jargon. Two-thirds preferred no jargon at all. <span style="font-size:85%;"><a href="http://news.bbc.co.uk/2/hi/business/6118828.stm">Link</a>.</span></p>
<p>I often rant about the importance of clear, simple language in your company&#8217;s marketing materials. But it&#8217;s noteworthy to discover that business jargon is often just as confusing to your own employees!</p>
<p>The survey, by the UK firm <span style="font-style: italic;">Investors in People, </span>confirms what most of us already know. Phrases like &#8220;low hanging fruit,&#8221; &#8220;blue-sky thinking&#8221; and &#8220;brain dump&#8221; confuse and annoy workers. They frequently don&#8217;t have a clue what you mean &#8212; but being human, they don&#8217;t want to risk looking stupid by asking. Instead, they sit there quietly, feeling stupid and inadequate. That&#8217;s bad for morale, bad for productivity. And it widens the divide between management and staff, the survey suggests.</p>
<p>&#8220;Bosses need to lead by example, ditch needless jargon and concentrate on communicating clearly with their employees,&#8221; concluded the study<span style="font-style: italic;"></span>.</p>
<p>As a professional writer, let me offer one partial solution: The first time you use any expression that might be confusing to your audience, explain what it means. For example:<br />
<blockquote style="color: #333;">&#8220;This month the sale team will go after the low-hanging fruit &#8212; you know, the easiest targets.&#8221;</p>
<p>&#8220;We need you to really push the envelope, to go beyond our usual limits.&#8221;</p></blockquote>
<p>See how subtle that can be? You don&#8217;t have to beat your team over the head to explain what you mean. In fact, it defeats the whole purpose. But it&#8217;s important to realize that not everyone instantly understands phrases that might seem like second nature to you.</p>
<p>Here&#8217;s a great way to define something that may be unfamiliar: Use the phrase <span style="font-style: italic;">As you know. </span>This gives your listeners credit for knowing something that, in reality, they may not actually understand:<br />
<blockquote><span style="color: #333;">&#8220;As you know, revenues are the total of all sales&#8230; &#8220;</span></p>
<p><span style="color: #333;">&#8220;As you know, blue-sky thinking may not have a practical application yet, but it&#8217;s still important to consider all the possibilities.&#8221;</span></p></blockquote>
<p>&#8220;Using management jargon doesn&#8217;t make you a good manager,&#8221; said Peter Russian, chief executive of <span style="font-style: italic;">Investors in People Scotland. </span>&#8220;The most effective bosses recognize that one of the keys to engaging, motivating and enthusing people is to communicate in a way which everyone can easily understand.&#8221;</p>
<p>What about you? How do you feel about jargon? Do you have any better ways to explain the meaning of an unclear expression or phrase? I&#8217;d love to hear your suggestions.</p>
<p>But now, please excuse me. I have to go shift my paradigm&#8230;</p>
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